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David Cook Album Discussion Forums - Talk About The New Single, Upcoming Album, & Chart Rankings Here.
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Aug 18 2009, 02:34 PM
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If you want to know the truth, you make or break my day... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,110 Joined: 27-June 08 From: Kansas Member No.: 10,424 |
Alright, guys, here's a new one... the music is done for this one and I actually recorded it with me singing/playing, and I have it up for people to download, if you so desire... here's the link: Hindsight download link The recording is what it is... *shrug*
If hindsight's always 20/20 Why am I still so confused About everything that happened between me and you I managed to misinterpret Every word you said to me And every touch was an accidental lie In hindsight, maybe I had it coming I was too naive to see the signs And too enamored to ask you why I was too ready to be heartbroken Now you're gone for good And there's only one thing left to say How could I know to expect this You softly broke down my defenses Then left me on my own I cursed your name as you walked away And closed my eyes to keep the tears at bay What hurts the most is how much I still want you In hindsight, maybe I had it coming I was too naive to see the signs And too enamored to ask you why I was too ready to be heartbroken Now you're gone for good And there's only one thing left to say Next time I won't fall so easily Because of how you've broken me In hindsight, maybe I had it coming I was too naive to see the signs And too enamored to ask you why I was too ready to be heartbroken Now you're gone for good And there's only one thing left to say Feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading. |
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Aug 19 2009, 02:24 AM
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![]() ~Always and Forever...David Cook~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 882 Joined: 24-May 08 From: London! Member No.: 5,610 Real Name: Evie |
i love it! the lyrics grabbed me from the start and your voice is lovely but a bit too loud in parts but thats my computer..is that you playing guitar?
and the melody is great! Good Job and keep it up:) |
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Aug 19 2009, 08:42 AM
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If you want to know the truth, you make or break my day... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,110 Joined: 27-June 08 From: Kansas Member No.: 10,424 |
Thank you so much! Yes, that is me playing guitar. As for the recording being too loud, it's probably because the only way I could record it was on the audio on a digital camera, haha... not the best quality.
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Sep 29 2009, 10:50 PM
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![]() Been Cook'ified ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 183 Joined: 22-October 08 From: Iowa Member No.: 13,214 |
WOW!!! i absolutely LOVE it!!!
and it's so extremely relatable... beautiful! |
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Oct 4 2009, 06:45 PM
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An Official Cookie ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 410 Joined: 5-October 08 From: Canada Member No.: 13,044 |
=D I love it! Great job! I love the lyrics and I agree its really relatible!
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