Please tell me what ya think! poem

when you walked in
I couldnt ingnore that grin
you never made me feel small
you never let me fall
first to let me be myself
first to let me prove oneself
one who understood
seeing I was just as good
I tursted you like
I never tursted anyone before
couldnt asked for anything more
hold my scarred heart with care
only you be the repair
lift it up in the air
you earned your share
you knew my most personal thoughts
but i knew yours
you heard me out
never gave me doubt
your voice enchanting
my heart chanting
your eyes mocking
my mind unblocking
wrap my heart with ur rigid rope
pulling me in,
here it goes
it only goes to show
nothing can last forever
my perfect world was hurled
everything gone so fast
already the past
everything a blur
it all started with her
it only took one look
you one strare
me one glare
you left with the girl
holding her like a pearl
my heart shattered
left unflattered
Why do I always do this?
want someone I can never get?
someone I can never forget?
I thought maybe it would all come true
I thought maybe there was something i could do
all in all
you never seized to enthral
but above all you cant
chose who you fall.. for
the hardest thing is
telling yourself to give up
to take a sip
from your own hearts death cup
The one time I wear my heart on my sleeve
it was the only thing that made you leave
walked away never looking back
thats when I heard my heart crack
I will never forget
those forgiving eyes
ones who never told me lies
the voice that held me so tender
making me surrender
your fire-kissed hair
you so unaware
If theres one thing
one thing you can count on
even when your well forgone
I will never forget you