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- March 17, 2010
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 Some New Songs I Wrote, some new songs i wrote.. |
 Dec 9 2008, 04:10 PM
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Starting To Like Cookies  Group: Members Posts: 39 Joined: 16-November 08 From: Muscatine,IA Member No.: 13,498  |
.. i haven't thought of names for any of them will you guys gimme some ideas..
Anger and agony Two sides i don't want them to see My buried heart.. God, what is my part? I see all those little ants, I'm laughing in my mind What are they supposed to believe? How hard will it be to find..? Screw you world, I don't wanna play Why should I stay? It's breaking me in two **** you!! Why this torture? Is this life a cure.. To the bigger purpose? I don't want to have to go through this Screw you world, I don't wanna play Why should I stay? It's breaking me in two **** you!! I see all those little ants, I'm laughing in my mind What are they supposed to believe? How hard will it be to find..? Screw you world, I don't wanna play Why should I stay? It's breaking me in two **** you!! (x2) Here's the second one i wrote.. I loved you, and you didn't love me.. I really wish you could see All my love for you went down the drain I wish you could feel my pain Three-Hundred fists in one single blow, That's how it feels, but you wouldn't know.. Only if you could caring about the other guys And for once look into my eyes You said I should never love, but it was too late Screw all the crap you said, I don't wanna wait .. and now I'm sitting here waiting for you It's tearing me up, breaking my heart in two The next day you just wanna be friends and forget about it all Will there be any more hugs? ..Any more late night phone calls? These are just some of the things i miss I'm waiting, For things to get back to the way it was before this Oh, is this the end? Will my heart mend? ..Maybe it is better without you I just wish you knew Three-Hundred fists in one single blow, That's how it feels, but you wouldn't know.. Only if you could caring about the other guys And for once look into my eyes (faintly) It is the end? Will my heart mend? (x2) |
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Dec 9 2008, 06:16 PM
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 David Cook is my Edward Cullen! <3 Group: Members Posts: 541 Joined: 3-May 08 From: Cookieville (Missouri) Member No.: 3,236 |
These songs are really good! I can kind of relate to the 1st song, sometimes I feel like that.
 As for the names, I couldn't really think of any! Sorry! |
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Dec 10 2008, 02:18 AM
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 A Cute Smile Makes My Man Perfect!!!! Group: Members Posts: 672 Joined: 6-August 08 From: Pakistan Member No.: 11,884 |
heyy nice songs
But i think u made a little mistake here "Only if you could stop caring about the other guys And for once look into my eyes" I think u forgot to add stop in this line The first one can be named "Breaking me" or "breaking" whatever u like And the second one hmmmmmmmm "I just wish you knew" or "better without you" or "without you" Sorry can't think of more rite now Zara xxx |
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Dec 10 2008, 02:55 AM
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 Cookie Monster :3 Group: Members Posts: 320 Joined: 22-May 08 From: Dubai Member No.: 4,976 |
oooh very nice. I remembered the band Hinder when i read the lyrics, for some reason
 I love these lines : "Three-Hundred fists in one single blow, That's how it feels, but you wouldn't know.." Awesome  As for titles, hmm.. For the first i agree with Zara, Breaking Me would be good. For the second, My Pain maybe ? |
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Dec 10 2008, 03:24 AM
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A Cute Smile Makes My Man Perfect!!!! Group: Members Posts: 672 Joined: 6-August 08 From: Pakistan Member No.: 11,884 |
"Three-Hundred fists in one single blow,
That's how it feels, but you wouldn't know.." Sounds something my bro wud do and i wud say tht in return, MAN!!! he punches real HARD
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Dec 10 2008, 03:30 PM
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David Cook is my Edward Cullen! <3 Group: Members Posts: 541 Joined: 3-May 08 From: Cookieville (Missouri) Member No.: 3,236 |
LOL! Yeah I like that part! I agree w/ Zara for the titles!
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Dec 10 2008, 08:29 PM
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 *Defective Halo Flickering* LiGhT oN! Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-May 08 From: Marsiling, Singapore Member No.: 5,936 |
yep i heart those lines too!
The ones with the fists and stuff... Zara has excellent suggestions there...take it from here...she's more experienced in this...as for my part..i guess maybe " Waiting for You " would suit the second one no? Lols. |
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Dec 12 2008, 02:07 AM
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A Cute Smile Makes My Man Perfect!!!! Group: Members Posts: 672 Joined: 6-August 08 From: Pakistan Member No.: 11,884 |
QUOTE (Mrs.DanielaCook @ Dec 10 2008, 02:30 PM)  LOL! Yeah I like that part! I agree w/ Zara for the titles! yeahh i made my bro read tht part and guess wht i got??????? ANOTHER BLOW!!!! QUOTE (sharkiedoz @ Dec 10 2008, 07:29 PM) yep i heart those lines too! The ones with the fists and stuff... Zara has excellent suggestions there...take it from here...she's more experienced in this...as for my part..i guess maybe " Waiting for You " would suit the second one no? Lols. yeah rite!!! look who's speaking the ONE who writes songs in a minute or shud i say a sec Take the second song to be "waiting for u" i like it |
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Dec 17 2008, 07:52 AM
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*Defective Halo Flickering* LiGhT oN! Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-May 08 From: Marsiling, Singapore Member No.: 5,936 |
QUOTE (Zara @ Dec 12 2008, 05:07 PM) yeah rite!!! look who's speaking the ONE who writes songs in a minute or shud i say a sec Take the second song to be "waiting for u" i like it No no... i LOVE Zara's suggestions....more ideas are better than one....choose hers! theyre perfect! |
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Dec 22 2008, 05:36 AM
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A Cute Smile Makes My Man Perfect!!!! Group: Members Posts: 672 Joined: 6-August 08 From: Pakistan Member No.: 11,884 |
hey was i being mean? i just read it and i was like the yeah rite part i wrote sounds sarcastic
Dun think tht!!! i noe u won't but still it's in a gud gud sense
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Jan 28 2011, 05:20 PM
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Been Cook'ified Group: Members Posts: 88 Joined: 22-May 08 From: philly Member No.: 4,967 Real Name: dani |
Love the second song likee no other.
exactly how im feelin right now!! It's amazing! |
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