Hey, i just wrote this quickly,so if you can offer any help please do!


Where are you?

You should be here, be here with me,
You are the only person missing and you dont even see,
You are the dark space in my life,
Where we used to be happy.

So where are you? Where are you?
You should be here with me,
Do you still love me, love me?
I can never be happy until i know.
So where are you? Where are you?

As i lay awake i wonder if your with her,
Or alone tonight, just like i am,
I cry myself to sleep,
Do you know your the only one i think about at night?

So where are you? Where are you?
You should be here with me,
Do you still love me, love me?
I can never be happy until i know,
So where are you? Where are you?

Im in a broken home,
Of shattered dreams,
Im without you, what can i do,
To make you come back to me?

So where are you? Where are you?
You should be here with me,
Do you still love me, love me?
I can never be happy until i know,
So where are you? Where are you?

Hey Good try there!
And by that i mean Awesome!
Repetition and rhyme take over you feelings like a tidal wave.
Keep on going.
Dont stop.
and please view my songs at Leftover Love...

Ahhax.
Thanks..
And keep on rawking!
Sharkie

Hey there Sharkie! haha wow cool name
aww man thanks so much for commenting! i realy do appreciate it!
and wow iv looked at some of your songs and they are realy great! good work!
thanksss
Evie x

i love it! never stop. can't wait to hear more from you (:

hey, aww thanks for your comment! i am gonna write some more, i just havent the time atm, but i will thanks!
Evie

Ahhax lols.
You seriously do have talent and gosh The Dash's Songwriters section is growing by a mile and im oh so busy with school work to go through the process...darn!

We should have like a Songwriters Idol thing soon...now that'd be awesome!
Your work is of exellence too and to see more of them would be like finding buried treasure!

Sharkie

wow!! sounds sumthing like wht kelly clarkson wud write
Sumthing very muc like where is ur heart by kelly clarkson
And u reminded me of her...she's my idol..so u can pretty much guess ihow much i luvd ur song
So like sharkie said KEEP RAWWKINNGGGGGGGGG
Zara
xxx

God I just went through an experience and reading this song is like you're inside my head.
I know how songwriting helps release emotion, and I'm looking forward to writing my own song about my experience here within the next few days.
Anyways,
good job.

Hey, wow guys thanks so much for ur comments! haha you have definetly made my day!
Sharkie, i know what you mean! the songwriters corner is growing so fast! which is amazing! all these new songs being posted blow my mind:)

uggghh and schoolwork! iv been ill the last few days and iv already missed so much work i have no idea how im going to catch up! but anyways...

Aww Zara! thanks so much. im glad you enjoyed it.. and phwaar i cant believe you just compared me to Kelly Clarkson, i mean she is my idol too XD


thanks! yes i totaly agree songwriting does help release your emotions..i wish i realised this sooner.
Great im looking forward to it!
LOL
Evie

yeah she's so amazing luvv kelly's voice so energetic and so funny
Seen any of her vids??????
She's pretty cool and is really witty

LOL she is a great artist! i realy love her album!
yh iv seen a few of them.
have u heard her new single? My Life Would Suck Without You?? omgg its great!

yes it is and have u heard the day we fell apart and save you
The r amazing tracks too.....
She soo RAWKSSSSSSSS

i have!! wow some great stuff lol
I have a new song! tell me what you think..



Im outta place
Without you
By my side,
Its harder to hide
My feelings inside
Im in distress,
Trying to suppress
My love for you,
Its something I cant undo
Its not part of the plan
But they don’t understand

How long will it be?
Till I see you again
Because waiting for you
Is loosening my control
Of my rational hold
Of what I knew
But now I all I want is you
All of you


I don’t want to be
Living life without you
Can you see what you’re doing to me?
You’ve got me under your spell
And they all can tell
Keep working your magic over me
And soon they will all see
That im falling for you
Falling for you
All of you

wow!!! is it sumthing for ur crush
Sure seems like
It's very teen-ish
And tht's gud

Thanks! haha yhh it is lol
Okay, iv just written another song! i dont think i can do anymore to it so here it is.. hope you guys like it!!:)





Make It Through

When you feel that you can’t go on
Take a minute to think about where you belong
Hold onto your dream don’t ever let go
Because right now right here
Is how your story unfolds

chorus
Don’t let your hopes fly away
Keep them close for another day
And that’s how, I promise you
That’s how you’ll make it through
Ohhhhhh ohhhhh
You’ll make it through


You can’t let this end
Don’t let it break you
Stay true to your heart
and you’ll be on the mend
So stop pretending your weak
Stand up and speak

Chorus


Stop saying your nothing
You are something special
My something special
I believe in you, I will see you through
To the top, I will prove you wrong
Cos it’s where you belong

chorus
Don’t let your hopes fly away
Keep them close for another day
And that’s how, I promise you
That’s how you’ll make it through
Ohhhhhh ohhhhh
Just believe
Trust in yourself and you’ll make it through
Make it through

awwwwwwwww this is very nice and very very very inspiring
Luv u
Zara
P.S: i luvddddddddddd the chorus

Hey, Thank you Zara!

I have just finished writing a poem...i dont really have a title for it. but maybe you guys could help me that..



Shes awaiting confirmation from the stars
From Venus, Apollo, even Mars
For a sign to let her know, shes not alone
To give her hope for a solution
Right or wrong just to get out of this constitution
You can have her prized possessions
Her items of worthless riches and collections
She knows the glory won't last for long
It won't show you were you belong
She doesn’t want the fame
The fortune or the reign
It gives her no gain, to know who's to blame
All that’s left to do now is wait,
To hold tight and pray
Shes waiting for a sign to let her know
Shes not alone

haha i was thinking "LIVING ON A PRAYER" lol tht was bon jovi's song but i just remembered innocent and living on a prayer rite after reading the poem

Very nice
And sad

hey:) aww thnks zara! haha i love the title innocent! ahh its a shame bout 'living on a prayer' that would have fit rlly well
thanks again
Evs

I know this seems weird but i kinda read your songs in ACOUSTIC.
Thats alot coming from mere words.

I mean, ACOUSTICS is when words come in place and when Meaning is the lead man in a song.
I say do your best with your expression and heck about rhythm.
Someones gotta be blind not to be able to sense the rhythm in your songs.

your ability has gone up to :
EXPRESS. 16/20
Rhythm 20/20

Just do a little trimming over at the expression and everythingd be fine!