Some Songs...

Ok so..I wrote these over the summer, so it's been awhile since I've even glanced at them. But I've shared them with a few people and I really want to know what you guys think. Please give me an honest opinion.


Tragedy

Blinded by
the convienence of it all
she gulps down his lies
no matter how small
spun to perfection
and gift-wrapped in innocence
I pieced together clues
mingled with wry hints
Kudos to you
we all must admit
even I couldnt have predicted
something this unscripted
Excuse me dear, would you, please?
I'm choking on this tragedy.


I've got a brand new frame of mind
one excluding all your lies
Take my hand; jump in; let go
For what it's worth: believe me I know
It's gunna be hard, much like life
but we're in this together, we can overcome strife
I wrote it for you: response NOT pending
here's to your fucking happy ending.

Your tales pieces
scattered throughtout
so your life is ruined
is that what this is about?
Breaking one heart just wasn't enough
When day by day, surviving gets tough
At least what I did
was to myself
I didn't inflict my wrath
upon everyone else.

I've got a brand new frame of mind
one excluding all your lies
Take my hand ;jump in; let go
For what it's worth: believe me I know
It's gunna be hard, much like life
but we're in this together, we can overcome strife
I wrote it for him: response NOT pending
here's to his fucking happy ending.






Burning Out

I'm getting higher off of you
The crescendoing legatos of your touch
than any drug you could produce
the electricity in my middle says as much
I'll drink you like my poison
the fire never quenched
my lips they will be moistened
in preparation for your lips drenched

Touch me, pull me, kiss me, fool me
This game is played so well
How long until our flame burns out?
Of course, only time can tell
Slur me a love song
Kiss me lightly in the rain
Whisper words just perfectly right
to hear me scream your name

Chemistry one oh one
tensions racing high
they don't teach how fun
it is
with your hand brushing my thigh
cling to me
I'll write for you
but oh, wait, what is this?
speechless for the very first time
adaquate words; they don't exist

Touch me, pull me, kiss me, fool me
Our game is played so well
Who cares when our flame burns out?
For now we cannot tell
Slur me our love song
You know I love the rain
Whisper unheard words just right
In return, I'll scream your name.







...
Yeah
:]

Voicemail?

So last week people on here were saying that we were supposed to be hearing David's voice when we called in to vote for him, but that never happened. Does anyone know if that will happen tonight, or if we will have to wait for the finale?
Thanks

A lil late- HAAY from Ohio

Hey, might be a little late to send out a "HAAAY" but..
HAAY
xD.
Anyone else here from the lovely state of Ohio?