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David Cook Album Discussion Forums - Talk About The New Single, Upcoming Album, & Chart Rankings Here.
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Oct 3 2009, 06:58 PM
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An Official Cookie ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 410 Joined: 5-October 08 From: Canada Member No.: 13,044 |
I wrote this for a friend of mine who passed away from cancer, although seriously I only met him once, but he was a good friend of my moms and an outstanding ,amazing person and very well missed. He really didnt deserve what happend to him and it just tore me apart. Please tell me what you think. =)
*verse* why does the world spin round a baby cry when its alone nothing can explain the unknown something so profound no one can answer why it was your time to go but your heart remains aglow *chorus* I learned from you that you can cry when your asleep feel a darkness that burns so deep That something can be sad enough to drown your own tears to relive the somber and linger the fears I learned from you that a life can live on your no longer present but not well forgone teaching in the minds of others leaving your mark on one another I learned from you *verse* You were more durable then me, you were braver then me thats to hard to understand to face something so wrong, and still be so strong thats to hard to understand, but your nothing without faith, cause your nothing without hope you still laughed when it seemed so unfit still shared your heart of gold protraying an art of irony still lived when you were about to fold *chorus* I learned from you that you can cry when your asleep feel a darkness that burns so deep That something can be sad enough to drown your own tears to relive the somber and linger the fears I learned from you that a life can live on your no longer present but not well forgone teaching in the minds of others leaving your mark on one another I learned from you *verse* Every day's a good day cause it could always be worse But thats hard to belive when you're falling apart Why does it always happen to the innocent? to the ones that trace the lines of you heart? You were healthy for the world but a posin chose you its seems so unfair that it had to be true Innocently accused by a scar that runs to the core forcing you into a state of war I know your in a better place, one with no pain no longer living in a twisted hell, living an ill fame *chorus* I learned from you that you can cry when your asleep feel a darkness that burns so deep That something can be sad enough to drown your own tears to relive the somber and linger the fears I learned from you that a life can live on your no longer present but not well forgone teaching in the minds of others leaving your mark on one another *verse* we had so little time, but I was so sure you'd be fine thought I'd see your face again you didnt deserve what came to you you were worthy of so much more An idol in my own eyes a hero in disguese |
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Nov 5 2009, 12:09 PM
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![]() ~Always and Forever...David Cook~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 882 Joined: 24-May 08 From: London! Member No.: 5,610 Real Name: Evie |
Oh its Beautiful!! you have a great tear jerker there i must say :'(
The beat and rhyming really jump out at me, so good work!! I think your friend Derek would be really proud:) Keep writing girly!! =] |
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Nov 5 2009, 09:54 PM
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An Official Cookie ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 410 Joined: 5-October 08 From: Canada Member No.: 13,044 |
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