Here's a song I wrote it is the first song I ever wrote.I know its not very good tell me what you think here its goes.


Your Smile

I see your smile everywhere I go.
Your eyes make me melt.
You are just to perfect.
And I love you.

Your smile is my day and night.
Your smile is my life.
Your smile is my world it's just so pure.
Your smile is my relaxing time if I have a bad day it can turn it upside down.

Everytime you open your mouth I jump up and down.
Your the only thing that keeps me sane.
You always make my day the best it can be.
And I love you.


Your smile is my day and night.
Your smile is my life.
Your smile is my world it's just so pure.
Your smile is my relaxing time if I have a bad day it can turn it upside down.
There's only word to say perfect.

mmmm....Ya Ya Ya

I like it!!!! I've tried writing songs b 4 and they all turn out crapy, but ur's is really good!

Thanks but I really don't think its that good. Hey you should but some of yours up.I sure they are better then mine.

I'll dig around in my room and try 2 find them! I think they were eatin' by my closet, LOL!!

Cool lol Thanks<3

Well I can't find my songs right now but I did find 2 poems. The first one is pretty crapy and the second one was just for fun.

Believe

I know you believe in me
But I can't believe in you
Why can't you see?
I want to love you, I really do
But it's just so hard
I don't know what to do anymore
Why must you play this card?
You make my heart feel so sore
As I lay here
And take in your scent
I see that tear
And at that moment
I knew you were the one

Yeah that one is kinda emoish! If that's even a word! This next poem was just something I did today cuz I was bored! It's kinda dumb!


As you can tell I love David
He and his friend Michael are known as Mavid
They laugh and they laugh
Cuz they're both fans of Zack Braff
They love to tell jokes
As specially when they drink cokes
As you can tell I'm a fan of David
So please, oh please don't make fun of Mavid

I'm still searching for my songs. They are much better than this stuff I just posted!

The first one is really good!!I love it!!The second one is cute<3 If you can find more put them up.I will put some more of might up soon.

OK I finally found them!


Memories

This pain you make me suffer
This pain will never disappear
Maybe it’s a state of agony
Sometimes I find myself standing on a thread of hope
But that hope never stays
I just collapse in the darkness
Why should I believe?
Why should I show mercy?
It seems now you’re suffering more than me
But you’re not
You can’t
For you haven’t seen what I’ve seen
You haven’t heard what I’ve heard
I’ll pretend to get used to it
But it won’t go away
It’ll never go away
When I’m alone in the darkness
Alone with the memories
I just throw them away
Throw them all away


Lightening

The lightening hit’s the ocean
The ocean sparkles in it’s light
Your love causes the sparkles
Your hate causes the lightening
Distant dreams join us on this stormy night
I tremble in the feeling of loss and loneliness
The fear of death comes over me
I see the sparkle in your eye
But I know there’s lightening in your heart
The love I have for you
Is turning into hate
My hands grip my feelings
But my feelings grip my heart and it dies


I have more just let me know if u want me to post the rest!

O they are good!I like them theres something with them lol That I like Ya why not put some more up?!

Yay I'm glad someone really likes my songs! Here r a couple more!

Life

The love I have for you
Gets me through
My love is all for you
It’s for the love I see in your eyes
It’s for the love that’s not here
I was once scared to show the love I have for you
If I listened to my heart
I’d be with you every waking moment of my life
If the sun and moon were to disappear
I’d spend the rest of my life in your arms
With those lonely stars in the sky


Last Night

I stand here in the silence
Waiting for an answer
An answer to my life
Why an I here?
Why did life turn out like this?
It’s nothing like I expected
No joy, no happiness
Just sadness
I want to continue, I will bear it
Just stay here beside me for this last night
Tomorrow you may go your own way
If you please
You’ll see that this can be fixed
Those dreams of forever hurt now
But it’ll go away with the loneliness
Just stay this last night
We’ll be alone with the memories
Because this is our last night
The last night with you


Love

You don’t understand
The answers you search for
Are met with a darker night
These moments are handed to you
Like them, you just waste them all away
But there has to be another way
Another way to get through this
Just grab my hand and don’t let go
All our sadness will disappear
The bad memories will run away with the sadness
Lift you head up high
Look at the truth in gods eyes
And realize what brought you here
Love



Dream

I see your face
And suddenly I’m falling
I could swear it’s a dream
When will you stop this chase?
Sometimes I swear the tears never dry
The tears of hope that run down my face
Will there ever be love?
Will I lose my pride?
I remain in this room
Asking myself those questions
I just sit here
I laugh
I cry
I start to think
Should I live?
Or should I die?
I know I shouldn’t wait
But I think it’s too late


Give up

Should I give up
When my heart’s heavy?
What do I do
When no one hears me?
Will you give me the key?
This isn’t fair
Who do I listen to?
Do you even care?
I need the key to my heart
Only you have it
Only you


I never really noticed how emo sounding my poems/songs were untill now! Wow, LOL! These are all the songs I have written so far! Please be honest and tell me if you truly don't like them!

I think personaly they are really good.They are better then what I could have write!

Honestly I think ur song is better than all mine put together!!! I don't really like any of my songs!

I think all yours are better then mine!!Dont say that believe in your self lol(I know I kinda sound like your mother!)hahaha

LOL! But it is true, I do need to believe in myself a little more.

YA!you do lol hahaha have a great day!

Here something I just wrote hope you like it! Everything When everything comes carshing down will you be there?Do you even love me?Your lies never cover up the truth all they do is make me wonder. (chours) Everything you do makes me mad Everything you do makes me sad Everything you do makes me wonder why.(2)Still I wonder can you answer one question?Why do you cause everything?Please please tell me the truth!(chours) Everything you do makes me mad Everything you do makes me sad Everything you do makes me wonder why Ya Ya tell me the truth!

I love that song!!! It's something I'd listen to all the time if was on CD!

Thanks!!!It really means alot!!!Your amazing lol When I have the time I will write some more.Do you have a myspace?

I loooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddddddddddddddddddddddddd
d all of these songs. I was just reading the comments but then this conversation started and it didn't seem to me tht it wud end (lol) so I thought i'd better tell both of u that u guys are superb, amazing, mind-blasting, mind-blowing AND EVERYTHING else ( that's good) so keep up the hard work and do try to become lyricists or even singers. Well done!
Luv ya
zara
xxx

Thanks so much!!!I really cant sing.But...I can write music lol Thanks again!!!!!

that's good though. i mean i can sing but now rite but after seeing your fabulous work mayb i'll try writing a few of my own songs. i guess it won't be tht hard.
Btw ur welcome.
luv ya
zara
xxx

I just wrote this last night it kinda of sucks but tell me what you think.

Summer Almost Over
Sitting here wasteing time cause summer almost over and I can't believe I haven't found something new well today is the day its my time to make it happen(chours)Today is the day its my time to make a change and stop wasting my time and summer la la la ya mmm.....its time to move on well I have a idea and if I beleive in myself it just might work(2)This summer was noting like I planed wish I could change it but its to late so its now or never(chours)Today is the day its my time to make a change and stop wasting my time and summer la la la ya mmm.....its time to move on well I have a idea and if I believe mysdelf it just might work ya ya mmm......

davidcooklovers44, I love ur last song, and yeah I have a myspace! My url thingy is myspace.com/grobanlover. My Name on there is the same (Mrs. Daniela Cook)!

Zara, I'm glad u like my songs, but I'm a horrible singer so there is no chance of ME singing them! LOL!

Thanks<3 Cool add me myspace.com/davidcooklover44

Ok I will!

Hey,if you put some more songs up I will.Tell me what you really think of my 3 songs so far I wont be mad if you dont like them!

Here is a song I just finished lastnight!

The Truth In Me

You look at me with those eyes
And you expect me to forget everything
But I don’t
You think I’ll leave you for someone better
But I promise you I won’t

Why do you keep running away?
Why can’t you just face your problems?
Face your problems!
Just come closer
And you will see
The truth in me

We run around and have the time of our lives
But we both know something’s wrong
We run in that secret meadow
So beautiful and sweet
But it hurts just like this song

Why do you keep running away?
Why can’t you just face your problems?
Face your problems!
Just come closer
And you will see
The truth in me

I can’t believe you said those words
Those 3 little words
So small and yet so big
They mean so much to me
But do they mean anything to you?
You say they do
But do you mean it?

Why do you keep running away?
Why can’t you just face your problems?
Face your problems!
Just come closer
And you will see
The truth in me
The truth in me
The truth in me

OMG I think its AMAZING!!!Way better than anything I could have ever wrote!!!!!I will put some more up soon!

alrite!!! guess i asked 4 too much (lol) but still this last song u wrote my fav part was "it hurts just like this song" it's soooooooo amazing tht u have a fabulous imagination and u really are good with the words u know where to put whcih word.
Amazing and superb!!
Luv ya
zara
xxx

Hey guys gone away 15-20 might or not be on(will if bored)Have a great week<333

I'm glad u guys like it!!! I was going 2 change it but now that I know u 2 like it I'll just leave it as it is!! I hope u 2 have a good week also! I don't no how u 2 r but r u still in school? If so when do ya'll start? I just started 2 day, on a Friday! I'm a sophmore now! Yayy!

school'll start on 25th august. EXAMSSSSSSSSSSS on the way.. But will do my best
NO need to change the song, it's beautifully written
Btw enjoy urself
Luv ya
zara
xxx

I bet my school started earlier than every 1 ealses school man!!!! We usually don't start school this early!

my school does and it sucks but have to go
Luv ya
zara
xxx

My school starts 26 and it sucks! I just wrote this lastnight and I think its the best song I writen so far hope you like it! Its called why here it goes I love you but why do you do the things you do?I get so mad and cry that's all you need to know mmm.... ya why?(chours)my life is all mess up and its your fault but I love you yayaya people say your a bad person and I always see past that but this time is the end mmm..... (2) you are the best when you want to be why?I'm so happy one minture and the next minture I'm not why? Ya mmm.... (repeat chours)(3) whithout you I don't know what I do but why? You only cause me pain but why? Mmm.... please why? Why? Why? Yayaya

Awww, I love it(like usual)! It's awesome! One of these days we should just make a big song book and give it 2 David and see what he says! LOL! I'd b 2 scared 2 give it 2 him though so u'd have 2 do it davidcooklovers44!

Thanks<3 maybe it would be a cool idea one of us could get it to him and say it was from the both of us are you going to meet him?my idol cocnert is the 8 i dont know if i am meeting yet.But I am afaired to lol

Man I wish I could see him!!! But sadly no I don't have n e tickets! Even if I did, I'd probably be 2 scared 2 even ask him 4 an autograph cuz I'm rediculously shy and I wouldn't want 2 bother him!!! I hate being shy!

You should'd be!!I wish i know if I was meeting him!!But If I do thats a cool idea.

Hey back r u? Well i think only the three of us know tht this topic exists (lol)
Well if u both can't give david the song book i'll give it to him and i won't feel shy cuz i'm a 13 years oldie cookie goldie (that's what my cuzins call me) and i'll say tht this book is from two of the most brilliant songwriters of the world and he'll probably snatch it from me b4 i say another word! and ur job will be done and mine too (meeting him and talking to him) but i'd rather you give it to him cuz u wrote it after all. I was just kidding and yeah tht's a wonderful song u wrote. So wht's up nowadays guys APART from SCHOOL TALKS plzzzzzzz i hate talking abt school cuz then i won't b able 2 sit on this site for more than half an hour there's always so much work to do
Luv ya
Zara
xxx

Btw guys i have just "Been Cookified" look under my avatar so happpyyy
Luv ya
Zara
xxx

LOL! I was extremly happy when I was first Cookified too!!!! Not much has happened here lately. I'm taking spanish now and that's cool! Oh wait here's something! I just got the Axium CD "Story Thus Far" and I've been listening 2 it none stop and it's inspiring me 2 write more songs! I wouldn't mind if either of u gave David my songs cuz I'll never c him! But once b 4 AI was over, I saw a guy at Wal-Mart who at first glance looked like David! My b-day is coming up in a few weeks and I've been joking, and saying I'm gonna walk all the way from Missouri to Conneticut for my b-day!!! I have 2 c David 4 my b-day! Y couldn't he just come 2 St. Louis on September 6th??? If I really could walk that far then my shyness better run away cuz there's no way I'm gonna walk 2 Conneticut and not at least say hi 2 him! LOL!

I was just reading some weird topic a minute ago I'm not sure what it was but some ppl were talking about how David gets on some of the Idol forems. Wouldn't it be cool if he made up his own name on here and then talked 2 all of us without us knowing it was him?! Sorry, just thinking out loud!

Yeah! now i don't know how many posts does it require to go ahead of "Been cookified" LOL. So wht r u waiting for write songs i'm feeling more excited to c wht's in store for me by u. And yeah i was just kidding abt giving tht songbook to david, i'm too shy myself for doing tht. But i guess once u see ur favourite celebrity or singer u can't control urself. Well, just imagine if u went from Missouri to Conneticut for ur b-day just to meet david cook he'll b impressed but u'll collapse for sure b4 u can even glance at him lol.
Well, i think it's b gr8 if he would join this site it'll b real fun and exciting.
Wht if u were davidCook pretending to b a girl from missouri.. hmmm .
Luv ya
Zara
xxx

LOL! I no that's what I thinking about u! It would be pretty funny if we were taking 2 him and saying how cute he was, thinking that he's just a fan! ur right I probably would colapse and I'm sure it would b right in front of him 2!

LOL it was just a guess though but it turned out to b perfectly rite i wud rather sit at home and get to know abt david from the internet rather than walking from missouri to connecticut cuz even if i impress him he wudn't lyk to spend the rest of his life wid a handicapped person
Luv ya
Zara
xxx
P.S: I wish u were david Cook mayb u r

LOL! If I was David then I'd be really conceited cuz I'd look in the mirror alot and just look at myself for hours and I'd look into my gorgous eyes! Then I'd tell every 1 how cute I am! It would b hilarious if u were David and u read this! If he really read this he'd think I'm some phsyco who probably needs 2 get a life. LOL! Well maybe not cuz he did say that he doesn't judge ppl and he seems 2 nice 2 think of a fan that way!

LOL if I was David i wud have sent u a flying kiss cuz u r so sweet
Luv ya
zara
xxx

Wow I feel speacial! LOL, now if u were really David then I would diffenatly be jumping up and down right now and just freaking out!!!! If I was David I'd send u and davidcooklover44 an autograph, some of those chocolate kisses and big batch of cookies!

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh tht'd be amazing i wudn't eat those cookies instead i'll keep them in an air-tight jar and look at them everyday thinking they were david cook's nose, ear, mouth, eyes and lips
Luv ya
zara
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LOL! sounds like something I'd do!!

gr88 thought just lyk mine
Luv ya
zara
xxx