It's not great but it's an attempt.....

Crashin!

So sick of this broken record / playin tunes around my mind
not a song i enjoy / just a memory of a sound
yet still it plays/ not what i need to hear
irratating all of me / brings me crashing to the ground

CHORUS
Change the station, not affect me this way
stiil the words cum out, drivin me insane
like an itch you just can't reach
getting stronger every day i'm beggin u
don't play the song again

Romantic words / just a thing of the past
long lingering glances/ are now all but lost
i'm sinking into my depression
well you've had ur succession now..
you've brought me crashing to the ground

CHORUS

can this get much worse / can't hear that 2nd verse
change the station, pull the cord / can't hear another word
i'm falling down, i'm crashing to the ground

thoughts if u will people. Hope u liked it a little at least.

a little!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M UR FAN NOW!!!!!!!!!! seriously u have done an amazing job!!!! It seems as if i'm reading the lyrics of a well-known songwriter!!!!!!!!
PLZZZZZ WRITE SUM MORE!!!!!!!! and try to record them too, it'll be amazing to hear it!!!!
Luv ya
Zara
xxx

P.S: I give u a standing ovation

Thanks for your comments..i'm not sure their quite as good as that but thanks.

Love for them to be recorded but I can't sing to save my life and to be honest no-one knows I write apart from the people on this site..

Anyways here's a few more hope you like.


Was it worth it?

Du get my image in your head
When you’re lying next to her
You were sleeping in our bed
No fear of getting caught
Du think about what you had
Is now what you’ve lost

Chorus
Was it worth it?
Was it all you thought it would be?
Was it exciting?
Is she better than me?
Was it all a game to you?
Am I just a playing piece?
Was I ever gonna win
Or did she get first place
I’m going home alone, guess that’s how I know

Are you sorry now?
Say you wanna come on home
No room for apologises
Just pack your **** your gone
Didn’t think of what you had
Now it’s all in the past

Chorus


Just words

It’s all just words
The things that you say
It’s all just words
Until you show me some other way
Your lips can do the talking
But if your hearts not here
Then I’m on my way I’m walking
It’s just too hard to care

Chorus
Give me all of you
All the parts you keep hidden
So much I wanna know
But I’m helpless without actions
They’re all just words
You’re whispering…. They’re just words

Tell me why, it's so hard for you
To open up and be sincere
You open your mouth, words they fall out
But it’s not the line that I wanna hear
I would wait forever
If I though you’d change
But I’m fighting a losing battle
Gotta go my own way

Chorus


Craving

I’ve never had a craving so strong
Pulling me in, me holding on
It’s a drug I can’t shy away from
Never a feeling more an addiction

Chorus
I’m gunna end up in rehab
And I well I just can’t have that
Take me in, lock me away
Not a solution just a reaction
The addictions still there within….

It’s an adrenaline to me, pushing me on
Pumping through my veins down to the core
No longer feeling helpless and alone
It’s this drug that I can’t break from

Chorus

Bridge
Dreaming of the day I’ll be free
When this craving abandons me
Will that come; can I lose this addiction?

Thanks for readingx

I LUVDDDDDDDD JUST WORDS
The others are superb too
Kepp it up!!
Hoping to read more songs by u
Luv ya
zara
xxx

FREAKIN EXCELLENT! I HOPE YOU COPYRIGHTED THEM BEFORE YOU PUT THEM ON HERE.

Yer they r ...thanks for that though. And thanks for your comments i'm hopin to post some more soon just deciding wot to post really.

Thanks again

and i forgot to thank-you for comments on mine, especially "boundries". THANK-YOU!!!!

ur welcum and rock on girl post more and more
Luv ya
zara
xxx

Your songs are really amazing...excellent work!

Thanks for the comments guys really appreciate u takin the time to write what u thought