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(WHAT WE HOLD WITHIN)

(1st Verse)
How much can a person face
before they lose their emotion
How much can a person take
before their life turns to commotion

How much can others expect
when they've never been in your place
How can they presume to suspect
what's hidden behind our mind's gate

(CHORUS)
Some may sympathize
others may try to empathize
But they can never really know
what we carry all alone
Some things you don't share
with those who truly care
We all have our share of pain
that are ours alone to bear

(2nd Verse)
No-one can ever know
until it's in their face
They could never even imagine
'till they've been in our place
No-one can understand
what we hold within
There's no way to understand
what we hold within

(CHORUS)
Some may sympathize
others may try to empathize
But they can never really know
what we carry all alone
Some things you don't share
with those who truly care
We all have our share of pain
that are ours alone to bear

(3rd Verse)
Down inside our soul
we all have a deep hole
That holds all our darkness
things we keep to ourselves
Even try to hide from ourselves
always from everyone else

(BRIDGE)
How can we expect them to know
why we've let our emotion go

(CHORUS)
Some may sympathize
others may try to empathize
But they can never really know
what we carry all alone
Some things you don't share
with those who truly care
We all have our share of pain
that are ours alone to bear

(Repeat 2nd Verse)
No-one can ever know
until it's in their face
They can never even imagine
'till they've been in our place
No-one can understand
what we hold within
There's no way to understand
what we hold within

Those things
all those things we hold within
























sharkiedoz
THAT was truly a piece of talent.
If you were to ever publish that song...i suggest you publish it in soft rock or rock alternative maybe with a tint of pop.
Even so...that was reeeeely very good.
Do right more and view my post too.
Its called Leftover Love thank you.
Mrs.DanielaCook
Ur an amazing writer! I hope u post more soon!
jlove22
ur really good u should so record your stuff it SO GUD!!!
Zara
nice really really nice, u r amazing no doubt, this song's worth an applause, and i no sharkie's gonna agree wid me on tht cuz i gave her an applause too tongue.gif
Luv ya
Zara
xxx
Rheanne
I love your lyrics. Do you write the music to accompany your lyrics?
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