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my lil bro is only 11 and he started song writing maybe 3 months ago. here are some of his songs:


What I Can Be-

Do you know what its like
to hide your face in fear
or be to afraid
to take your feet off the ground
just to lift up fly

well you wont know if you never try

like shadows in faded light
im invisible
not everything inside can be my alibi
just got to let it out, let it breathe
just watch and see
what i can be

i finally see the light
out of the darkness and into the bright
is this how it feels
to make my world live a life

no more hiding
just waiting for my life to unfold
later in this world
where will i be

i dont need to worry
but until then

like shadows in faded light
im invisible
not everything inside can be my alibi
just got to let it out, let it breathe
just watch and see
what i can be

(what i can be)


Without You-

this is our last goodbye
what we had between us seems to die
as all our lives
we sulk each day, for what we had
but you'll never know what i feel inside

im runnin off to a place without you
build my life up
have my dreams come true

im over this, im over us
everything we had gets left in the dust

i've got more in life
to live for
roll the dice
my worlds like an open door

but when im gone
maybe you'll hear
what i've been preaching
the words i said
were worth teaching

so i'll run off to a place with no you
build my life up
have my dreams come true

out with the old in with the new
i'm giving like a second chance

but this time im doing it
.....
without you





if you wanna see more let me know ill post some others...
thnx!!

GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ar u serious!!! if u r then tell ur bro tht he's AMAZING phewwwwww tht lil boy knocked out my brain it's hard to believe tht he wrote this, btw congratz u got a young writer there
Really really nice work, i'm well amazed
Luv ya
zara
xxx

Those are very deep thoughts for an eleven year old...he is very good!

Here is another from my baby bro.
hope you like B-lo !!!



Never Come Up-

i've walked through this door
i've told these lies before
still waiting on my dreams
im fading into forever

today will be the day
where my story ends
watch the days roll by
your gonna look in my eyes

and see....

like a moon that never goes down
and like a sun that never comes up
just throwin it all away
cuz itz all the same at the end of the day

another sad song plays today
days never seem to go my way
can you hear the old broken melody
across the heart of all humanity

as the moon stands strong
i know this time i don't belong
so sing along with me
discover the person i've come to be

like a moon that never goes down
and like a sun that never comes up
as all eyes fill with sorrow
i won't be back tomorrow

as the door closes on my dreams
you can sue up the seams
i left it all behind, and never said goodbye

i left it all to die

hey ur bro's amazing, even i can't think tht deep hehhe

Silhouette-

When your footsteps start to fade,
and your love becomes a game
ill be your friend, till the end
i will follow you

not in love, but in friendship
like a silhouette in your mind

over seven seas you mean the world to me
im gonna put it on the line
but you just got to give me time
you've got the key to my mind
and the passage to my heart
so find a way to get inside and
i will,i will follow you

lonely rivers to the sea
lonely rivers wait for me
im gonna find you
seven seas is like a strream to me

just look behind you
ill be there
just look through the shadows
and the mist of emotions

a silhouette ill stand in your life
waiting to catch you when you fall

over seven seas you mean the world to me
im gonna put it on the line
but you just got to give me time
you've got the key to my mind
and the passage to my heart
so find a way to get inside and
i will,i will follow you

Juustt Wait

OMG so good!
Ask him to keep on writing.
He'll succeed.
And it'll help him.

Trust me.
I started writing when i was 8 so yea.
It seriously helps in many things!