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BookwormGal
I wrote this quite a while ago. It's about my crush on David Cook so I thought this site would be an appropriate place to share it.

Hope you like it! smile.gif

Love Eternal

Maybe not in this life
But another soon to come
When barriers will not divide
And you will be the one
You will love me

Perhaps the sun will rise
And the breeze will stir the trees
You’ll say goodbye to lovers passed
And give your love to me
I will love you

Come night draped in darkness
When the light is hard to see
We will embrace and hold on tight
And light in love there will be
Love eternal

There is a place in time
Where we are meant to fall in love
Hearts joined, souls embraced, by the powers above
Though it may not be so clear why I can’t have you now
I will wait with hope and trust that we will meet somehow

Love eternal
2ndmrsbriancalcara
That's really pretty!
sharkiedoz
Cute Cute!!!!!
Loving the use of imagery!
BookwormGal
QUOTE (2ndmrsbriancalcara @ Nov 15 2008, 05:43 PM) *
That's really pretty!



Thank you so much smile.gif

QUOTE (sharkiedoz @ Nov 17 2008, 06:59 AM) *
Cute Cute!!!!!
Loving the use of imagery!


Thank you! I'm pretty proud of it
Cooked For Cook
That is amazing. You are an amazing songwriter.
sharkiedoz
Heya.
Mind checking in on my work?
Its called Leftover Love

Thanks a mill!
Salma
It's great, but I recommend you to change it into a poem. It's either a hard rock song, or a poem. Very deep biggrin.gif Click here to go to my awesome website!
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