-THE BEST MINUTES OF MY LIFE-

Girl you make my palms all sweaty,
And girl you make me wanna do bad things,
Since the first time I saw you I wanted to be with you,
Now i'm just waiting till that phone rings

I want you to know when i'm around you I feel the butterflies,
And I feel the jealousy when you're around other guys,
My love for you makes me want to sing,
Now I got your number and i'm waiting for that phone to ring

I gathered the courage and I asked you out,
Now it's the first date and my love for you make me want to shout,
At least I know one emotion i'm not without

So now where back at your place and i'm wandering what move you're gonna make,
And the feelings burning up inside of me for gods sake...
And then there is the kiss..and i'm so awake

Next thing I know were on your bed,
And I am on top of you only staring at your head,
Those were the best minutes of my life...
And the feelings so great nothing can hurt me, not even the pain of a knife...

I want you to know when i'm around you I feel the butterflies,
And I feel the jealousy when you're around other guys,
My love for you makes me want to sing,
Now I got your number and i'm waiting for that phone to ring
(Chorus X2)



~GHOSTS~

There are ghosts in my head,
They make me want to cry myself to sleep and stay in bed,
My sanity could fall to pieces at a rip of a thread,
Sometime all I see is a wall of dark red

Theres no one here to comfort me,
I am so ******* lonely,
Sometimes I wonder if i should just throw all this nothing away and O.D.

What the hell none of my dreams will ever come true,
Why can't I call it quits, I want it all to be through,
But, then I remembered there was you...

You comforted me when I was down,
You saved me when I was about to drown,
You were there until the final round

I remembered that you love me and I cant go..
And I loved you even though it didn't really show,
But, I just want you to know...

What the hell none of my dreams will ever come true,
Why cant I call it quits, I want it all to be through,
But, then I remembered there was you....
(Chorus x2)

Lurving the ferst few parts of the best minutes in my life then afterwards it kinda gets awkward.
Giving honest critisism.

your ferst song i'd rate a 13/20
Second being 8/20

Seriously you gotta cut down on the vulgairties.

i agree with u sharkie
Plzz do something abt all those vulgar stuff u have in ur songs......
otherwise nice songs , i mean good concept and really very nice altogether

What is the first song?
Rap, slow rock, hard rock, slow waltz?

I would recommend slow rock or rap, but I don't know. Very nice, though. Do you play anything? Maybe you could make up a tune to it. I love the idea, like a little story. Keep rockin'!