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Hey guys- first of all I hope you are doing well. smile.gif I know you all must be excited about David's album coming out tomorrow world-wide. I for one couldn't be more happy for David in all my life and i've been listening to his song Permanent all day long since I got home.. just getting lost in enjoying the amazing feeling he brings to my heart. All of this leads up to a poem I decided to write on this fine night in California. It's not my best but I put all that I could into it for anyone who is interested. <3. smile.gif Take care!


The song is drowning your pain as you feel it all hit home
His voice is like a beatiful echo telling you you're not alone..
It's telling you you're beautiful and that someone understands
And when when no one seems to love you, there's always a place to stand..
All you can think to yourself is what an inspiration, what an engaging heart..

Everything is spreading far and wide
You're on this journey looking into his eyes..
His dream is becoming more apparent, more alive and real
And you pray within the night no one forgets what is home
That everyone remembers the first passion that collided into our souls
The first touch, the first look, and how much it shook the hell before us and gave us a new home and friend..
He became so automatic, always available and it swept everyone away...
Oh how the good things in life never seemed to end when we melted within his glory and he melted within our love
It was like seeing stars, it was like seeing what laid above..

You feel his song burn your eyes, you feel it reaching inside that one spot in your heart..
You can't express anything other than saying three words out of breath," I love you.."
If God didn't created beautiful then words would always fail..
Everything would run dead and frail..
He's reassuring in this life of forgotten promises, bringing color back to those who are living in black and white..
Liftting them higher and higher with his song of those who struggled to see the light through the darkness of where they lost everything..
He's just a man redeeming everything in his path..
Pouring water out on the heated rath..

He's caressing your heart with all that he feels..piercing the hurting areas with an inevitable connection..
Giving back your voice, giving back your life..
Gently forming a spark of love again that you can always hold on to in this world of where there's hands slipping everywhere and constant reminders of pain..

Here's your precious secret...
Through all the imperfections you have, through all of what you can give and take..
There's amazing feelings that can impact you through what you put at stake..
You can give yourself away to the world or you can give yourself away to your heart
And your answer stirs clearly in front of his beautiful face..
He's sharing his songs with you one by one..
He's giving you some sort of comfort through his lyrics that you can still find faith in what you're throwing away..
He can make you feel wrapped up in a hug under a blanket looking at the stars, watching his dream...
Vision yourself praying one last time into the night telling another lost heart about him..
Whispering to that scared, shaking face..
"Listen to him..rest your head..
Hear his voice, hear the words that are being said..
And look him in the eye."

There is no interuptions as you sense the song ending..
It ends in one beautiful, peace as you close your eyes..
You feel rested and safe listening the next song that occurs...
And then you're caught in another session of tears, remembering his love and remembering his dream..
Discovering simple, amazing words that cling on to your heart on the last string..
"Just hear him sing..just hear him sing.."

The song is drowning into your pain as you feel it all hit home
His voice is like a beatiful echo telling you you're not alone..
It's telling you you're beautiful and that someone understands
And when when no one seems to love you, there's always a place to stand..
All you can think to yourself is what an inspiration, what an engaging heart..
It's so beautiful..please have it never break a part
Because you love him..because you love him...
TaylorSue
That is really nice. I really enjoyed that. I don't know what else you've written, but that was quite good. Technically a little rough around the edges, if that's what you meant, but it's from deep within your soul and it's so descriptive of how David has touched us all. Thank you. I think I'm going to print that out.
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