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2ndmrsbriancalcara
It's called Those Nights
by Amy V

v.1
I catch your gaze, our eyes lock
Don't look away, electric shock
an open window to your heart
I look inside, but what I find is captured moments in time.

chorus
Like the time that we danced at the concert last fall
the time that we laughed over nothing at all
the first time that you kissed me goodnight
Our first kiss and our last fight
our first hello and our last goodbye
come back to me and we'll have one of those nights
do you miss those nights

v.2
I catch your voice, the perfect sound
Throlughout the noise, it's you I found
Words that weren't meant to reach my ears
I keep quiet, and what I find it captured moments in time

Chorus

Why keep waiting around for somebody new
When all this time you've know I missed too
If you say no, explain to me your thoughts
Baby add it up, connect the dots

Think of the time that we danced at the concert last fall
the time that we laughed over nothing at all
the first time that you kissed me goodnight
Our first kiss and our last fight
our first hello and our last goodbye
come back to me and we'll have one of those nights
I know you miss those nights

Those nights, those nights
I catch your gaze, don't look away




So what do you think?
~Amy
davidcooklovers44
Love it<333
Great Job(:
Zara
Why keep waiting around for somebody new
When all this time you've know I missed too
If you say no, explain to me your thoughts
Baby add it up, connect the dots


this is so very thoughtful...i luv ur song...it's very nice and THOUGHTFUL like i said smile.gif
2ndmrsbriancalcara
QUOTE (Zara @ Jan 16 2009, 10:34 AM) *
Why keep waiting around for somebody new
When all this time you've know I missed too
If you say no, explain to me your thoughts
Baby add it up, connect the dots


this is so very thoughtful...i luv ur song...it's very nice and THOUGHTFUL like i said smile.gif


It's really just about how you have all these memories from when you were with someone. And then you can just tell that they want you back because they are recalling all these awesome moments that you had together. That part was like, you know you can say that you don't miss me all you want, and you can keep telling yourself that, but you know that you miss all those times that we had together. It's saying that if you really don't miss me then explain why you keep recalling all the great times we had. If you really miss me, then just let go of your pride and come back.
~Amy
feelingxxunique
Electric shock.



I love that. I wrote something similar in one of my songs as well, I know exactly what you're talking about.
Nice :]
2ndmrsbriancalcara
QUOTE (feelingxxunique @ Jan 18 2009, 06:42 PM) *
Electric shock.



I love that. I wrote something similar in one of my songs as well, I know exactly what you're talking about.
Nice :]


Is it on here? what's it called? I'll go read it!
Zara
u explained with more THOUGHTFULNESS which makes ur song more beautiful to me smile.gif
feelingxxunique
QUOTE (2ndmrsbriancalcara @ Jan 19 2009, 07:44 PM) *
Is it on here? what's it called? I'll go read it!



My songs are in a thread called "Some Songs" on this site
Sweet thanks :]
2ndmrsbriancalcara
QUOTE (Zara @ Jan 20 2009, 05:26 AM) *
u explained with more THOUGHTFULNESS which makes ur song more beautiful to me smile.gif


Awesome! I'm so glad you feel that way!

QUOTE (feelingxxunique @ Jan 20 2009, 05:59 PM) *
My songs are in a thread called "Some Songs" on this site
Sweet thanks :]


I'm guessing you meant "Burning Out" right? It's good! I really like the line: "The crescendoing legatos of your touch"! It's really creative!
~Amy
skyeyaw
QUOTE (2ndmrsbriancalcara @ Jan 16 2009, 11:06 AM) *
It's called Those Nights
by Amy V

v.1
I catch your gaze, our eyes lock
Don't look away, electric shock
an open window to your heart
I look inside, but what I find is captured moments in time.

chorus
Like the time that we danced at the concert last fall
the time that we laughed over nothing at all
the first time that you kissed me goodnight
Our first kiss and our last fight
our first hello and our last goodbye
come back to me and we'll have one of those nights
do you miss those nights

v.2
I catch your voice, the perfect sound
Throlughout the noise, it's you I found
Words that weren't meant to reach my ears
I keep quiet, and what I find it captured moments in time

Chorus

Why keep waiting around for somebody new
When all this time you've know I missed too
If you say no, explain to me your thoughts
Baby add it up, connect the dots

Think of the time that we danced at the concert last fall
the time that we laughed over nothing at all
the first time that you kissed me goodnight
Our first kiss and our last fight
our first hello and our last goodbye
come back to me and we'll have one of those nights
I know you miss those nights

Those nights, those nights
I catch your gaze, don't look away




So what do you think?
~Amy

PRETTY COOL
sharkiedoz
God you're back!
Back to those amazing phrases.
Kudos.
Another job well done...

This hit me hard.
So hard it hurts.

Think of the time that we danced at the concert last fall
the time that we laughed over nothing at all


Your song caught me off guard.Lols.
2ndmrsbriancalcara
QUOTE (skyeyaw @ Jan 24 2009, 02:21 AM) *
PRETTY COOL



QUOTE (sharkiedoz @ Jan 24 2009, 06:58 AM) *
God you're back!
Back to those amazing phrases.
Kudos.
Another job well done...

This hit me hard.
So hard it hurts.

Think of the time that we danced at the concert last fall
the time that we laughed over nothing at all


Your song caught me off guard.Lols.



lol! Thanks guys!
~Amy
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