Rose.Peddal
Jun 24 2008, 07:56 AM
DISCLAIMER: In no way, shape or form is this featured song based on David Cook himself. The character "Davie" is completely fictional and has no realtion to David Cook. Davie's Song (He Made Papa Proud)Davie's got a new guitar
Believeing that he'll go far
Papa tells him to get his head aout of the clouds
Even though all Davie wants is to make Papa proud
Davie's trying not to cry
The laywers tellin' him he's gotta decide
Stay with sweet Mama
Or unpleased Papa
As he circles Mama's name,
He feels like he's putting Papa to shame
But he still has a gutiar and a goal
Even though he has a broken home
Papa tells him to get his head out of the clouds
Even though all Davie wants is to make Papa proud
Few years later, Davie's got an album and a band
He's got the world all in his hands
The girls scream as he hits every note
But they're not the ones he wants to impress the most
But Papa's lost control
And he's lost in an addiction
Hittin' an all time low
Papa tells him to get his head out of the clouds
Even though all Davie wants is to make Papa proud
Davie got the call after the show of his life
Papa's dieing tonight
Davie's driving at almost 108
Prayin' to got he's not too late
As Papa looks at his son,
He takes his hand and says
"You made me proud son, every single day"
Papa let go of his sons hand
Papa slipped away
Davie smiles as tears roll down his face
He made Papa proud
He made Papa proudI hope you guys liked it

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Melodic_Mama_23
Jun 24 2008, 08:52 AM
that was beautiful! It made me cry! Great work!
Rose.Peddal
Jun 24 2008, 11:58 AM
One Chance For Fame
A man stands on stage tonight
His heart is racing at the speed of light
His hands are sweating from his palms
His mind is going over his own song
The DJ screams his name
One chance for fame
His fingers find their way to his guitar
Playin' the song he wrote from his heart
Music plays through out the room
Could this be glory or doom?
DJ screams his name
One chance for fame
Been eight years in the making
Now the chance is his for the taking
The crowd screams his name
For years he heard his dreams were lame
Now as he sings his song
Any doubt he had is gone.
DJ screams his name
One chance for fame
He holds the last note longer than before
The club knows they've struck gold
Just a simple man with a gift beyond compare
Now givin' it for the world to share
One dream of glory coming to life
DJ screams his name
One chance for fame
Melodic_Mama_23
Jun 25 2008, 07:51 AM
great job!
JonasFanTurnedCOOK
Jun 25 2008, 05:37 PM
i love them both!!
good job
Rose.Peddal
Jun 26 2008, 02:57 PM
The Runaway
She's fallen from grace
She needs a loving embrace
Lost in a cold to the bone
Needs a mother
Needs a home
Needs to feel home
She lays in an alley way
Done trying to find her way
Realizing she has nowhere to go
She raises her voice,
Screaming for home
But no one can hear her
And do they care anyway?
No one loves the runaway
Walking the streets
Making holes in the shoes on her feet
Don't they notice her?
She's the girl all over the place
As another stanger passes her and never looks at her face
She realizes no one is safe
She raises her voice,
Screaming for home
But no one can hear her
And do they care anyway?
No one loves the runaway
She feels so low,
She falls to the ground
Knees taking a powerful blow
She makes a fist and pounds the ground
She's screaming
But they don't hear a sound
She'll always be the lost
Never the found
She raises her voice,
Screaming for home
But no one can hear her
And do they care anyway?
No one loves the runaway
Cookie's Girl
Jun 27 2008, 02:50 PM
Wow...these are amazing...Brought me close to tears. Very good. Is there any recordings anywhere that I could listen to?
olivia :D
Jun 28 2008, 05:06 PM
those are really good! youre a great songwriter. that first one gave me cold chills! (which is a good thing)
Rose.Peddal
Jul 1 2008, 05:06 PM
Never Leave Me (Stand By Me)
Benny holds Mandy close,
Her face as pale as a ghost
She just got the news that she has the big 'C'
Benny doesn't wanna believe,
God, she's only 16
He feels a tear hit his arm,
He looks down at her,
Seeing right to her breaking heart
While his feels like it's being shot
He tells her he doesn't know what he can do
She tells him with a smile
Never leave me,
Never let me go,
I'll be just fine,
If you stay by my side,
And even if this gets the rest of me,
Just tell me you'll stand by me
Mandy looks so sick in her bed
As he watches her,
He feels like his heart's made of lead
She's lost all of her hair
Why is life so unfair?
He tells her he doesn't know what he can do
She tells him with a smile
Never leave me,
Never let me go,
I'll be just fine,
If you stay by my side,
And even if this gets the rest of me,
Just tell me you'll stand by me
And as her eyes slowly began closing
He cried at her side,
He knew where she was going
And before God came down to get her,
She handed him a small letter
He held it to his chest as hers rose for the last time
He look her in his arms and cried
He finally opened the note,
And inside she wrote,
"I'll never leave you,
Never let you fo
I know you'll be fine,
If I stay by your side
And even if this gets therest of you
Just Remember
I'll stand by you"
ForeverCook
Aug 22 2008, 04:38 AM
truly amazing...and so so touching..x
Mrs.DanielaCook
Aug 24 2008, 06:47 AM
I love Davie's Song!! The rest of the songs on here are great 2 but Davie's Song is my fav!
Noura
Sep 4 2008, 01:02 PM
Those are all amazing, and the first brought me so close to tears. You have an unbelievable songwriting ability
Michelle is here!
Sep 7 2008, 07:35 AM
Never Leave Me, is my favorite. It made me cry. And most of the time people think that people are lying when they say that, but I'm being serious. I could feel the raw emotion in it.
david*cook*fan
Oct 1 2008, 04:45 AM
Gosh!!
These songs are amazing!!
It almost brought me to tears!
Okay maybe it did...
jlove22
Oct 22 2008, 07:25 AM
OMG these are so touching they sound like they should be on a film soundtrack (you know the songs they put on to bring tears to your eyes) these wud defo do that they're really gud.
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